Then I posed questions to my supervisors about our company’s involvement in cybernetic weaponry development.
Now, I can feel metal grinding on metal inside my body. Steel tension springs coil where my muscles used to be. My sensory perception has been replaced by digital readouts and neuro-chemical input.
I awoke today standing on the war-torn fields of Angola, firing a heavy caliber handgun against my will. When my optical sensors identified no more active lives – man, woman, or child – I “fell asleep” again.
I’m now the ultimate war machine.
Every night, I dream of death.
Wednesday, October 15, 2008
[100 word horror fiction] I used to be alive.
Posted by Nate at 2:13 AM
Labels: Nate's Shorts, SGM Month of Halloween 2008
1 comment:
Very ominous, post-apocalyptic. I can dig it. That reminds me, Fallout 3 is coming. Mmm...
Can I suggest a small rewrite in the third and fourth paragraphs:
"Today I awoke, standing on the war-torn fields of Angola, firing a heavy caliber handgun against my will. When my optical sensors identified no more human activity – man, woman, or child – I “fell asleep” again.
I am now the ultimate war machine.
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